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You Never Buy Me Flowers

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When you come home after a hard day's work,
there's a plate on the counter and food on the stove.
Your favorite bottle is chilling in a bucket of ice;
as you relax in your Lazy Boy, I think, "isn't that nice?"

You never buy me flowers

While you watch a movie or go to play Xbox
I'm standing in the kitchen, elbows deep in dishes.
When you say you're tired and you're taking a nap,
my arms are overflowing with the laundry stack.

You never buy me flowers

After you awaken you want a shoulder rub;
I put down the broom and attend to you at once.
Then you go to shower and find a shirt needs sewn;
once the tear is mended tomorrow's lunch must be tended.

You never buy me flowers

When midnight comes and goes we lay in bed together;
I'm almost asleep when you whisper naughty things into my ear.
You roll me over and I sigh as I look right into your eyes
and shout 'You never buy me flowers' and then I roll back over.
This was wrote off an informal prompt of "He don't buy roses"


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supershadowhuntr95's avatar
This piece touches me on a deep emotional level. 
All too often have I been an object of sex and never been granted someone who would paint the sky for me if I decided I didn't like it being blue. 
It's really well done - the grammar is perfect from what I can see, and I love your use of inner rhyme in parts of the poem.